Above are our groups feedback sheet's in which were received before half term and in relation to our music video pitch. These feedback sheets were completed and handed out after presentation of our created music video pitch.
What points have been made within these feedback sheets?
Positive Points:
- The signature look of the band is great
- A very good, detailed representation of the background story of the band
- Very good record label information
- A great and clear idea
- Appropriate narrative ideas
- Excellent location ideas
Point to improve upon:
- Some of the location ideas may be a difficult issue, simply because of travel and health & safety purposes
- The vision for the music video could be a bit more clearer
- The narrative needs further tweaking
Reflective Analysis:
Overall after receiving these feedback sheets, a lot of consideration has been taken on board; and we as a group have decided that we will be needing to make some changes and adjustments in order to develop our ideas; and over the coming weeks, we will be improving our initial ideas by developing within our particular thought processes.
Judging from the feedback sheets completed, the vision for our music video will need to be clearer and I feel that we as a group will be able to improve this simply by making ourselves clearer with what we aim to achieve after completion of the music video.
We received a lot of positive notes which is great; and again with the positive points we shall be developing upon these to improve even further.
Overall however, the feedback sheets have provided some good analysis and details with how our project is commencing, which is great for us as we are able to show sings of progression.
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